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Remember this little animation test I did a few months ago? aura-alora.deviantart.com/art/…

I redid it with a little more effort. It's still not complete, but I'd like to get some comments and critiques before I go further.

The story now has a name (Transdimensional) and one extra character (as of yet unnamed LGM). "Alex" has now become a placeholder name, since I've figured out how to put an Input name into the box but I haven't done it yet. When I do that all the characters will call you by the name you choose instead of Alex (lol).

I haven't yet figured out how to do a proper inventory box despite looking at a lot of tutorials... so removing things from your inventory is controlled by the story for the moment, until I figure out how to do a proper inventory that you can take stuff out of at will. Might be a looonngg time before you see any progress on that front There's no need for inventory at this point, but it will be introduced in the form of a bag I think. That way I can make a separate screen for it...it's not exactly what I had in mind but it works. :lmao:

I'll continue to update this file with progress, so check back every now and again =3

There are also a few coding errors, but it seems to work fine despite that so I haven't fixed them yet :shrug: Oh and if anyone knows how to make music fade out with the screen I'd appreciate it if you could note me about it >_>;;

One day this game will have some ACTUAL game elements in it, but that day is not today! Game elements added! You can now search the library! There isn't THAT much to find, but it's better than a boring talky-talk all the time. Please notify me if you find any bugs. I know about that thing with the chingy noise, but I don't know how to fix it at this point. 8/7/2014


EDIT:
Errors found so far:
- Music overlays if you press certain buttons
- "Please Enter Name" is input text when it's supposed to be Static
-Chingy noise when clicking certain items in library game.
-Cheats don't work at this stage, but they exist.


FIXES:
- Fixed the "Please Enter Name" problem
- Added an extra panel for context as per Erulisse2's suggestion
-Made the fade to black scene change longer
-Added some extra sound files
-Drew Tina's head in 3/4 view and added blink
-Added some extra stuff and edited title screen 10/11/2012
-Changed title screen music to fit the tone of the game
-Added an extra scene + mini-game 8/7/2014

CREDIT:

Backgrounds were taken from google, and if anyone knows the source let me know so I can properly credit when this is done.
All sounds are from: www.flashkit.com/loops/Ambient…
More sounds from: www.grsites.com/, www.mediacollege.com/, www.soundjax.com and www.pacdv.com/sounds/ -- all royalty free as far as I can tell.
And there was a lot of help from tutorials. If you're interested, please check out the "Animations" folder of my favourites as well as this youtube account: www.youtube.com/user/VampieGam….
Thanks to :iconerulisse2: and :icon2-5-9: for additional input
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hamichiru Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
I don't know what's updated, but its really hard to click stuff! I was at this scene trying to find evidence that Ms.Peanut was around, and I had to use the tab button to know what to click...
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Aura-Alora Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok! Any suggestions on how to improve it? 
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hamichiru Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Try to make the clickable area larger. I think that should be enough.
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Aura-Alora Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok, thanks! Will do so :salute:
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hamichiru Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
It looks promising ^^ I'll check back from time to time.
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Aura-Alora Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!! :highfive:
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hamichiru Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
:highfive:
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2-5-9 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
This is really cool! :D I love how much you've done on it. LGM has a cool design. :3
Two notes:
The dimensional travel could still be a bit clearer. Maybe some sort of weird shaky effect instead of a fade to black?
When that other person calls on Tina and she looks to the side, my first thought was that her hairstyle had slipped out. That drawing could greatly benefit from being redrawn more obviously at 3/4 view or maybe even profile.
But beyond that it looks really good. :) I like the style and the story seems cool. Good luck with the project. It looks like a whole lot of work. :XD:
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Aura-Alora Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Shaky effect is impossible at this stage because that would require some serious frame-tweaking XD I did add a few panels to try and clarify though, let me know if it worked ^^;

I did some minor tweaking on Tina, is it better or do I need to draw a full profile shot?

Thanks so much for all your input!!! :love:
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2-5-9 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Yeah, the longer fade makes it more obvious that it's actually happening and not just story convention. :)

Showing her head moving works a lot better. :3 The final frame could still benefit from a redraw, but it definitely works as it stands now. :D
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